Woman in Black Review Comments

Getting in the mood for working on my novel, “Night Moon,” I was listening to the album I created for “Night Moon” during FAWM 2026 and realized I hadn’t posted a comment video for “Woman in Black.” So proud of this song and appreciative of the wonderful comments from my fellow musicians. It’s motivating me to get back to work – lol!

I wrote the lyrics during Nov/Nov mentioning a “Sazerac” and, ironically, found the Jazzy Saz (based on a Sazerac) at Lou’s Jazz & Blues on Star of the Seas in December.

And yeah, where there’s a Florida tiki bar, there’s a biker dude – catch the “some of them ride Harleys” line in the song.

Just Another Dude

This April marks the 30th anniversary of National Poetry Writing Month. When I signed with my literary agent for my novel Real Women Wear Red, she told me that my writing was “poetic, almost lyrical” and I wondered what that meant so I started exploring poetry and songwriting.

When I wrote my first official song for professional feedback, the mentor asked if I knew the difference between a poem and a lyric. It was obviously a poem. He helped me turn that poem into lyrics and it became “Everybody Lies.” Often my song lyrics start off as a poem. But can lyrics also be a poem?

What about “Just Another Dude.” Is it a poem or strictly a song?

“Just Another Dude”

You were the one I’d dreamed about
You were the one who hurt me most when I found out
I thought you’d be the one who’d be there forever
No, not ever

It may seem so simple from where you stand
You think you can just reach for my hand
But let me tell you something that may seem rude
You’re nothing more than just another dude

When we were together
We thought we were so clever
But that’s what you do when you are young
When you feel so strong

It may seem so simple from where you stand
You think you can just reach for my hand
But let me tell you something that may seem rude
You’re nothing more than just another dude

You know I hate plans that fall apart
I play my hand from the start
You like secrets I can tell for sure
Under cover lover is the allure

It may seem so simple from where you stand
You think you can just reach for my hand
But let me tell you something that may seem rude
You’re nothing more than just another dude

What do you think? A poem? A song? I can only hear it as a song now, especially with the repetitive hook.

Here’s the song written during FAWM 2025. 

SBS Favorites Playlist

My favorite songs I’ve written vary from time to time. But usually it’s the song I’m working on. But, in-between challenges, looking back, as of this moment, these are my top songs that I wrote during the songwriting challenges hosted by the FAWM (February Album Writing Month) community.

This collection includes comments from the FAWM community, where available. This is such a treasured testimony to some of my best times in the music community. Thank you!

Like my dad loved to listen to music, strap on some headphones, sit back, and enjoy. Thanks for listening!

Lonely Girl, Lonely Boy

What If

Just Another Dude

Ghost of My Younger Self

Living My Best Life

Tequila, Take Me Home

One

Survive

Pondering

Night Moon

Woman in Black

Once Upon A Time

The Bungalow

Broken Man

Pom Pom Cigarettes